Ladies and gentlemen,Our English teacher asked me to say something about pollution 短文改错Ladies and gentlemen,Our English teacher asked me to say something about pollution the other day.Now I’m very glad to share her opinion with you.As we kn

Ladies and gentlemen,Our English teacher asked me to say something about pollution 短文改错Ladies and gentlemen,Our English teacher asked me to say something about pollution the other day.Now I’m very glad to share her opinion with you.As we kn
Ladies and gentlemen,Our English teacher asked me to say something about pollution 短文改错
Ladies and gentlemen,Our English teacher asked me to say something about pollution the other day.Now I’m very glad to share her opinion with you.As we know,modern industry has brought about seriously pollution,which have a bad effect on the air,the water and the soil around us.On the other hand,the population keeps grow and plenty of dust and chemical waste are produced,that results in running out of resources and environmental pollution.But as a matter of facts,people are on great need of clean air and safe drinking water,and children are expected to be healthy.In my opinion,that’s OK if all everyone of us do all we could to protect the environment rather than simply depend the government to solve the problem of pollution.短文改错啊

Ladies and gentlemen,Our English teacher asked me to say something about pollution 短文改错Ladies and gentlemen,Our English teacher asked me to say something about pollution the other day.Now I’m very glad to share her opinion with you.As we kn
1.在第一行的的pollution前加the
2.第二行 share my opinion
3.第二行industry 变成industries
4.第三行 to the air
5.第四行grow 变成growing
6.第五行开头的that 变成 which
7.第五行as a matter of fact
8.第六行 in great need of
9.第七行 去掉everyone
10.第八行巴depend 变成 depending
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Ladies and gentlemen, *our* *english* teacher asked me to say something about pollution the other day. Now I'm very glad to share *my* *opinions* with you. As we know, modern *industries* has brought ...

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Ladies and gentlemen, *our* *english* teacher asked me to say something about pollution the other day. Now I'm very glad to share *my* *opinions* with you. As we know, modern *industries* has brought about *severe* pollution*;* which have *dreadful* *effects* on the air, the water*,* and the soil around us. On the other hand, the population keeps *on* *growing* and plenty of *dusts* and chemical *wastes* are produced, *which* results in environmental *pollutions* *and resource depletions*. But as a matter of *fact*, people are on great need of clean air and safe drinking water*;* children are expected to be healthy. In my opinon, *everyone should do all they can do* to protect the environment rather then simply *depending* the government to solve the *problems* of pollution.
我要是你的英文老师　我会被气死的。。。。。　　

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语法错误其实不算多，最大的问题是思维有点儿混乱，我尽量在保持题主原始思维的前提下改一下语法和修辞上明显的一些错误吧。
Ladies and gentlemen, our English teacher asked me to talk about the pollution the other day. Now I'm very glad to share her opinion with...

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语法错误其实不算多，最大的问题是思维有点儿混乱，我尽量在保持题主原始思维的前提下改一下语法和修辞上明显的一些错误吧。
Ladies and gentlemen, our English teacher asked me to talk about the pollution the other day. Now I'm very glad to share her opinion with you. (英语老师的意见？啥意见？是同意是反对?) As you know, modern industry has brought about serious pollution which have a bad effect on the air, the water and the soil around us. On the other hand, the population keep growing and plenty of dust and chemical wastes are produced. That creates resource shortage and hurt the enviornment more. In fact, people are in great need of clean air and safe drinking water, and our children need to be healthy. In my opinion, we should do all we could to protect the environment rather than simply depending on the government to solve the problem for us.

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1.pollution后面加on on the other day
2.share my opinion
3.seriously→serious
4.which后面的have→has
5.grow→growing
6.that→which
7.as a matter of fact
8.in great need of
9.去掉everyone
10.depend →depending