作业帮Thank you for teacher and school In a quiet night ,the stars are blinking .Under the lamplight.Iseem to see the teacher’s silhouetteI heart aches I’m thinking about teacher ‘ busy silhouetteI heart aches.Oh,my dear teacher The tenth anniversary
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Thank you for teacher and school In a quiet night ,the stars are blinking .Under the lamplight.Iseem to see the teacher’s silhouetteI heart aches I’m thinking about teacher ‘ busy silhouetteI heart aches.Oh,my dear teacher The tenth anniversary
Thank you for teacher and school
In a quiet night ,the stars are blinking .
Under the lamplight.Iseem to see the teacher’s silhouette
I heart aches
I’m thinking about teacher ‘ busy silhouette
I heart aches.
Oh,my dear teacher
The tenth anniversary celebration is coming
I am feel very pleased
In here,I want to thank you
Thank you for the year to the teaching of us.
For this poem,I want to thank you.And thank this school:
Teacher,thank you
School,thank you
帮帮修改一下,看看哪些不是很好,老师说,背影哪一段,可我不知道怎么改...
Thank you for teacher and school In a quiet night ,the stars are blinking .Under the lamplight.Iseem to see the teacher’s silhouetteI heart aches I’m thinking about teacher ‘ busy silhouetteI heart aches.Oh,my dear teacher The tenth anniversary
错了几个地方：
1 Thank you for 后面接原因,改为Thank you ,teacher and school 或者在for 后面原因,如Thank you for your culture（栽培）and education（教育）
2 I heart aches 典型的中式英文.改为 My heart aches,或 I am heartache.
3 I am feel very pleased能不用就不用,feel和am只能用一个,或者用于 am feeling,改掉very.改为：I am feeling so pleased,或I am feeling pleased very much.其中 am feeling 可改为过去式 felt.
建议改几句：
1 thank this school 改为 thank my school,亲切点.
2 teacher用复数,要不有的老师会生气哦
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