英语改错提I want to Londer by the train Last summer.During my stay here,the weather was terrible ang there werea la lot of traffic and pollution.we first went shopping in Oxford Street,but I didn't like them.Iwas bored.We then visited to lost of

英语改错提I want to Londer by the train Last summer.During my stay here,the weather was terrible ang there werea la lot of traffic and pollution.we first went shopping in Oxford Street,but I didn't like them.Iwas bored.We then visited to lost of
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I want to Londer by the train Last summer.During my stay here,the weather was terrible ang there werea la lot of traffic and pollution.we first went shopping in Oxford Street,but I didn't like them.Iwas bored.We then visited to lost of museums,which I didn't enioy at all .My aunt might see that I wass very unhappily and decided to take myself to the cinema.We went to see a Disney film in the end.On the thind day we went for a long walk and is was very cold and start to rain.After that I was sick,so I read some comic books of my cousin's indoors and didn't leave the house for rest of my time in London.It wasn't a very good holiday.

英语改错提I want to Londer by the train Last summer.During my stay here,the weather was terrible ang there werea la lot of traffic and pollution.we first went shopping in Oxford Street,but I didn't like them.Iwas bored.We then visited to lost of
I want(went) to Londer（London） by the(去掉the) train last summer.
During my stay here,the weather was terrible and there were(was) a lot of traffic and pollution.
We first went shopping in Oxford Street,but I didn't like them (it).I was bored.
We then visited to(把to去掉) lots of museums,which I didn't enioy at all .
My aunt might see that I was very unhappily（unhappy） and decided to take myself(me) to the cinema.We went to see a Disney film in the end.On the third day we went for a long walk and it was very cold and start(started) to rain.After that I was sick,so I read some comic books of my cousin's indoors and didn't leave the house for (加上the) rest of my time in London.It wasn't a very good holiday.

I went to Londen by train last summer.During my stay there,the weather
was terrible and there were a lot of traffic problems and pollution.
went shopping on Oxford Street, but I didn't l...

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I went to Londen by train last summer.During my stay there,the weather
was terrible and there were a lot of traffic problems and pollution.
went shopping on Oxford Street, but I didn't like it.It was boring.Then,we visited lost of museums that I didn't enioy them at all .My aunt might notice that I was very unhappy and she decided to take me to the cinema. We went to see a Disney film in the end.On the third day we went for a long walk. But it was very cold and started to rain.
After that I was sick,so I read some comic books of my cousin's indoors and didn't leave the house for the rest of my time in London. It wasn't a very good holiday.

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