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I have a lot of hoppies.I like play the piano so I play it every day.I think play paino is relaxting.I like dance.I dance three times a week.I like music very much but I don't sing.watching TV is also one of my hoppy.I play it twice a week.I think it is interesting.Sometines I like watching TV.I watch it after dinner.I have fun in it.I like……(这里看不清）too.I play it twice a month.It is tired for me.
您这写得也太……
记着,有了every day就不要再写社么表示次数的词了,很矛盾.还有,最后一句话还是去了吧,它和主题实在扯不上多大关系,写作文不要迷失了主题,还有,注意语句连贯
作文水平有待提高啊同志,虽说我的水平也不咋的,但,看到你写的,我欣慰了.
话说,你的爱好真的好多,你应该很忙吧,想我别说打球,连吃顿饭都懒得动弹.
这篇文章写得还不懒
别怪我语句直接了点
太混乱了，不过初二来说很好了，加油，我口语还行，时态一般
这 是一篇 好作文
我说你这字也太.........