弟弟8岁,转学到新学校用英语做自我介绍,我弟弟8岁,从A小学转学到B小学,新学期开学时需要用英语向新同学做介绍,我写了个草稿,Hi,Everyone,this is a good opportunity to talk about ourselfs and get to know eac
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弟弟8岁,转学到新学校用英语做自我介绍,我弟弟8岁,从A小学转学到B小学,新学期开学时需要用英语向新同学做介绍,我写了个草稿,Hi,Everyone,this is a good opportunity to talk about ourselfs and get to know eac
弟弟8岁,转学到新学校用英语做自我介绍,
我弟弟8岁,从A小学转学到B小学,新学期开学时需要用英语向新同学做介绍,我写了个草稿,
Hi,Everyone,this is a good opportunity to talk about ourselfs and get to know each other.My name is Tom,I'm eight years old.I'm from A primary school.From now on,I will study in B primary school with all of you.I like running,watching TV,playing computer game.I hope I will be your friend in next 4 years.
1)A小学说成A primary school是否正确?
2)文中是否有语法、用词不当的地方请指正.
3)如果你有更好的意见或建议,请指出.
弟弟8岁,转学到新学校用英语做自我介绍,我弟弟8岁,从A小学转学到B小学,新学期开学时需要用英语向新同学做介绍,我写了个草稿,Hi,Everyone,this is a good opportunity to talk about ourselfs and get to know eac
第一句有点中国话…可以改成:I'm realy pleased to stand here and introduce myself.然后就可以说my name is.
其实八岁能这样说已经很厉害了 所以也不多做什么修改了
(你说的那些小学的说法什么的都是正确的)