我这句英文有没有语病?Hear flute in spring morning of the Beijing
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我这句英文有没有语病?Hear flute in spring morning of the Beijing
我这句英文有没有语病?
Hear flute in spring morning of the Beijing
我这句英文有没有语病?Hear flute in spring morning of the Beijing
我觉得有错:
1.如果是句子应有主语,但此句没有;若是省略句应该有一定语言环境.如果是短语则应写成”Hearing 或to hear"
2.我们是听声音而不是听笛子,所以是"the sound of the flute"
可以改为:Hearing the sound of the flute in the spring morning of beijing.
或:I heard the sound of flute in the spring morning of Beijing .
不要the
我觉的:
错的
on the spring moring of Beijing
Hear flute in spring morning of the Beijing
毛病不少:
1.如果是句子应有主语,但此句没有;如果是短语则应写成”Hearing ..."
2.笛子是不能听的,应说"the sound of the flute"
4.一般先说地点再说时间
3.具体地名前不加the
应改为:Hearing the sound ...
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Hear flute in spring morning of the Beijing
毛病不少:
1.如果是句子应有主语,但此句没有;如果是短语则应写成”Hearing ..."
2.笛子是不能听的,应说"the sound of the flute"
4.一般先说地点再说时间
3.具体地名前不加the
应改为:Hearing the sound of the flute in Beijing in a spring morning.
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1。hear做动词却没有主语
2。冠词使用错误
3。时态有问题
应该改成:
1.The sound of flute was heard in the spring morning of Beijing
2.I heard the sound of flute in the spring morning of Beijing
另外richard兄弟对...
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1。hear做动词却没有主语
2。冠词使用错误
3。时态有问题
应该改成:
1.The sound of flute was heard in the spring morning of Beijing
2.I heard the sound of flute in the spring morning of Beijing
另外richard兄弟对,应该是sound of flute,但是如果你想表达的是一种意境,而不是现象的话richard兄的翻译就不太符合了
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没有啊!
Hear flute in spring morning of the Beijing应改为Hear the flute in spring morning of Beijin
句子不一定要主语的,可以是祈使句.