英语作文续写加改错 帮我把这篇文章续写下,我实在写不下去了,前文有错的帮忙改下,Do you like children Do you like looking after children?Yesterday ,I went to visit my uncle .My uncle and aunt ‘s daughter ‘s name is

英语作文续写加改错 帮我把这篇文章续写下,我实在写不下去了,前文有错的帮忙改下,Do you like children Do you like looking after children?Yesterday ,I went to visit my uncle .My uncle and aunt ‘s daughter ‘s name is
英语作文续写加改错 帮我把这篇文章续写下,我实在写不下去了,前文有错的帮忙改下,
Do you like children Do you like looking after children?
Yesterday ,I went to visit my uncle .My uncle and aunt ‘s daughter ‘s name is Mao Kexin ,we called her Xinxin .Xinxin is only 3 years old .She is very cute and clever .So we all like her very much..
In the afternoon ,my father ,mother ,aunt and uncle were all going out .Just Xinxin and me stayed at home .They let me take care of Xinxin.
I hugged her to sit on the sofa to watch TV .Xinxin wanted to watch cartoons,so Iput the television show the animations .After a while ,she seems hungry ,so she cried for eating .Then I gave her a box of milk and a piece of bread .After that ,she smiled happily ,and continued to watch the cartoon.
But good times didn’t last long ,after a long time .I put her on the sofa ,but she accidentally in the sofa pee.I’m very surprised and unhappy .I quickly with a towel to wipe up the sofa .
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英语作文续写加改错 帮我把这篇文章续写下,我实在写不下去了,前文有错的帮忙改下,Do you like children Do you like looking after children?Yesterday ,I went to visit my uncle .My uncle and aunt ‘s daughter ‘s name is
Do you like children Do you like looking after children?
Yesterday ,I went to visit my uncle .My uncle and aunt ‘s daughter ‘s name is Mao Kexin ,we call her Xinxin .Xinxin is only 3 years old .She is very cute and clever .So we all like her very much..
In the afternoon ,my father ,mother ,aunt and uncle were all going out .Just Xinxin and me stayed at home .They let me take care of Xinxin.
I hugged her to sit on the sofa to watch TV .Xinxin wanted to watch cartoons,so I put the television show the animations .After a while ,she seemed hungry ,so she cried for eating .Then I gave her a carton of milk and a piece of bread .After that ,she smiled happily ,and continued to watch the cartoon.
But good times didn’t last long ,after a long time .I put her on the sofa ,but she accidentally pee in the sofa .I’m very surprised and unhappy .I quickly used a towel to wipe up the sofa and clean up the pee.
in some ways,children are trouble,but they are very lovely and lively,their lives are very free,they do not need to worry about many things.If i stay with them.I can forget the trouble.Children are pure.when i am with them,my heart is also clean and honest.
i love children!i love to stay with them!
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Do you like children ? Do you like looking after them?
Yesterday ,I paid a visit to my uncle's house . My uncle and aunt have a daughter. Her name is Mao Kexin , and we call her Xinxin . Xinxin ...

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Do you like children ? Do you like looking after them?
Yesterday ,I paid a visit to my uncle's house . My uncle and aunt have a daughter. Her name is Mao Kexin , and we call her Xinxin . Xinxin is only 3 years old .She is very cute and clever . We all adore her very much.
In the afternoon , my parents, aunt and uncle were all out, leaving just Xinxin and me at home . They asked me to take care of Xinxin.
I hugged her to sit on the sofa to watch TV . Xinxin wanted to watch cartoons,so I put the television on the animation channel . After a while ,she seems hungry and cried for food . So I fed her a box of milk and a piece of bread . After that ,she smiled happily ,and continued to watch the cartoon.
But good times didn’t last long . After some time when I came to check on her, she accidentally peed on the sofa . I was surprised and unhappy about the mess . I quickly put Xinxin to a dry place and changed her diapers. Then I wiped the sofa with a towel . It took me a whole hour to clean up the stain. When my parents were back I was already tired out.
I have to say it takes a lot of work and patience to look after a 3-year-old child, but then I realized how my mom and dad had to clean up the mess I made when I was little. It is a trouble we all need to go through at some point of our life, isn't it?

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