求英语高手帮我检查一下有没有语法和拼写的错误But judging from the present situation,the competition ability of small and micro businesses in our country is relatively poor,and there has been a misunderstanding on the market.It is

求英语高手帮我检查一下有没有语法和拼写的错误But judging from the present situation,the competition ability of small and micro businesses in our country is relatively poor,and there has been a misunderstanding on the market.It is
求英语高手帮我检查一下有没有语法和拼写的错误
But judging from the present situation,the competition ability of small and micro businesses in our country is relatively poor,and there has been a misunderstanding on the market.It is exactly these wrong ideas make the majority of small and micro businesses in our country failed on brand operation.In reference to past extensive literature and on the basis of the XingWang Wood Industry ,combined with the actual situation of its brand building and put forward a number of proposed adjustments.

求英语高手帮我检查一下有没有语法和拼写的错误But judging from the present situation,the competition ability of small and micro businesses in our country is relatively poor,and there has been a misunderstanding on the market.It is
接浮云掠,最后一句有问题,最后一度话不是个句子,全句看起来只是一个状语,你要表达的意思是,通过参阅.基于.结合.,我们提出了一系列的调整吗?
如果是这样的话,你这句话应改为
In reference to past extensive literature and on the basis of the XingWang Wood Industry ,combined with the actual situation of its brand building ,we put forward a number of proposed adjustments.加主语,去and

It is exactly these wrong ideas make the majority of small and micro businesses in our country failed on brand operation.这句有点问题，应该是makes the majority of small and micro businesses in our country fail on brand operation

It is exactly these wrong ideas make the majority of small and micro businesses in our country failed on brand operation. 此句为强调句,需要在ideas和make之间加上that,另外句子中使用到make sb. do, 所以failed要变成fail.最后一个句子表达不清楚...

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It is exactly these wrong ideas make the majority of small and micro businesses in our country failed on brand operation. 此句为强调句,需要在ideas和make之间加上that,另外句子中使用到make sb. do, 所以failed要变成fail.最后一个句子表达不清楚,语法错误较多,因为不明白意思所以不好动手改

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接浮云掠，最后一句有问题，最后一度话不是个句子，全句看起来只是一个状语，你要表达的意思是，通过参阅。。。基于。。。结合。。。，我们提出了一系列的调整吗？
如果是这样的话，你这句话应改为
In reference to past extensive literature and on the basis of the XingWang Wood Industry , combined...

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接浮云掠，最后一句有问题，最后一度话不是个句子，全句看起来只是一个状语，你要表达的意思是，通过参阅。。。基于。。。结合。。。，我们提出了一系列的调整吗？
如果是这样的话，你这句话应改为
In reference to past extensive literature and on the basis of the XingWang Wood Industry , combined with the actual situation of its brand building ，we put forward a number of proposed adjustments.加主语，去and

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