有哪位英语达人帮我看看这段文章里有没有语法错误?Once upon a time,there was a large mountain called Tai-Ying which sat between Old Man Yu and the nearest village.Every day,Old Man Yu had to walk many extra miles in order to circl

有哪位英语达人帮我看看这段文章里有没有语法错误?Once upon a time,there was a large mountain called Tai-Ying which sat between Old Man Yu and the nearest village.Every day,Old Man Yu had to walk many extra miles in order to circl
有哪位英语达人帮我看看这段文章里有没有语法错误?
Once upon a time,there was a large mountain called Tai-Ying which sat between Old Man Yu and the nearest village.Every day,Old Man Yu had to walk many extra miles in order to circle around Tai-Ying,and finally he decided to simply move the mountain out of his way.
Old Man Yu called together his children and grandchildren."I am going to move Tai-Ying."
The family cheered.
The youngest stood and asked where the moutain could be moved.
Old Man Yu thought for a second."I will dump it in the sea."
Again the family cheered,and promised to help make his dream a reality.
Now,as everyone knows,it is no small matter to move a mountain,and this mountain was no exception.After a year,only a tiny portion of Tai-Ying had been carted to the sea.
A shopkeeper in the village laughed at Old Man Yu."Your dream is foolish.You are old,and Tai-Ying is monstrous."
Old Man Yu shook his head and smiled."You are right,but your vision is short.I have children who have children who will bear more children.As time goes on,I get stronger and the mountain grows weaker.Tai-Ying will be moved."
And so it was.

有哪位英语达人帮我看看这段文章里有没有语法错误?Once upon a time,there was a large mountain called Tai-Ying which sat between Old Man Yu and the nearest village.Every day,Old Man Yu had to walk many extra miles in order to circl
old man yu前面应加the house of,
in order to circle around Tai-Ying改为because of mountain Tai-Ying
The youngest stood and asked where the moutain could be moved,stood 后加up；could改为should,moved后加to
to help make his dream a reality改为,to help him realize his dream.
it is no small matter改为 it is not a small matter
You are old,and Tai-Ying is monstrous."改为You are too old,whileTai-Ying is too monstrous."
but your vision is short改为,you are short-sighted.
I have children who have children who will bear more children.改为：I have many children who have their's,and their children will bear more children,too.

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Once upon a time, there was a large mountain called Tai-Ying which sat between Old Man Yu and the nearest village. Every day, Old Man Yu had to walk many extra miles in order to get over Tai-Ying, and...

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Once upon a time, there was a large mountain called Tai-Ying which sat between Old Man Yu and the nearest village. Every day, Old Man Yu had to walk many extra miles in order to get over Tai-Ying, and finally he decided to just simply move the mountain out of his way.
Old Man Yu called together his children and grandchildren. "I am going to move Tai-Ying."
The family cheered.
The youngest stood and asked where the moutain could be moved.
Old Man Yu thought for a second. "I will dump it in the sea."
Again the family cheered, and promised to help make his dream come true.
Now, as everyone knows, it is no small matter to move a mountain, and this mountain was no exception. After a year, only a tiny portion of Tai-Ying had been carted to the sea.
A shopkeeper in the village laughed at Old Man Yu. "How foolish you are! You are old, and Tai-Ying is monstrous."
Old Man Yu shook his head and smiled. "You are wrong, and your vision is short. I have children who have children who will bear more children. As time goes on,my people get stronger but the mountain grows weaker. Tai-Ying will be moved."
And so it was.
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