高二英语改错1:In some parts of London, missing a bus means to wait for another hour.2:—Why haven't you bought some butter? —I meant, but I forget.3:Looking at his exciting look, I knew he hadn't calmed himself

高二英语改错1:In some parts of London, missing a bus means to wait for another hour.2:—Why haven't you bought some butter? —I meant, but I forget.3:Looking at his exciting look, I knew he hadn't calmed himself
高二英语改错
1:In some parts of London, missing a bus means to wait for another hour.
2:—Why haven't you bought some butter?
—I meant, but I forget.
3:Looking at his exciting look, I knew he hadn't calmed himself down.
4：He requested that we must offer some money to him.
5:He searched for all his pockets but failed to find his pass.
6:—I hear John refused to tell the truth and was taken away by the polie.
— Where did you put that up?
7：She was broken down when she heared the news, but quickly recovered.
8:The earthquake was happened at night, causing thousands of people to be dead.
9:I have explained the question twice, however he is still quite puzzled.

高二英语改错1:In some parts of London, missing a bus means to wait for another hour.2:—Why haven't you bought some butter? —I meant, but I forget.3:Looking at his exciting look, I knew he hadn't calmed himself
1. to wait 改为 waiting
2 some 改为 any, 疑问句
3 exciting 改为 exciting
是他感到兴奋,才会有兴奋的表情
不是他的表情让人兴奋
4 去掉must, request已经是要求的意思了
5 去掉searched后面的for
searched for 是寻找的意思
这里是说他把钱包搜了一遍,不是找钱包
6 hear 改为 heard
你的polie是打错了吧? 应该是police
7 was broken down 改为 broke down
崩溃不用被动
8 was happened 改为 happened
发生不用被动
to be dead 改为 to die
9 标点符号有问题
要么,把however前面的逗号,改为句号,大写H,在However后加逗号
要么,把however前面的逗号改为分号,在however后加逗号
要么把however改为but

1:In some parts of London, missing a bus means 【waiting】 for another hour.
2:—Why haven't you bought 【any】 butter?
—I meant 【to】, but I 【forgot】.
3:Looking at his 【e...

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1:In some parts of London, missing a bus means 【waiting】 for another hour.
2:—Why haven't you bought 【any】 butter?
—I meant 【to】, but I 【forgot】.
3:Looking at his 【excited】 look, I knew he hadn't calmed himself down.
4：He requested that we 【should】 offer some money to him.
5:He searched 【for删除】 all his pockets but failed to find his pass.
6:—I hear John refused to tell the truth and was taken away by the polie.
— Where did you 【pick】 that up?（你从哪里知道的）
7：She 【 broke】 down when she heard the news, but quickly recovered.
8:The earthquake 【was删除】 happened at night, causing thousands of people to be dead.
9:I have explained the question twice, 【but】 he is still quite puzzled.

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1 to wait 改为 waiting
2 forget 改为 forgot
3 exciting 改为 excited
4 去掉 must
5 去掉 for
6 hear 改为 heard
7 was broken down 改为 broke down
8 去掉 was
9 however 改为 but

1 to wait 改为 waiting
2 forget 改为 forgot
3 exciting 改为 excited
4 to him改为for him
5去掉 for
6 hear 改为 heard
7 was broken down 改为 broke down
8 去掉 was
9 however 改为 but

嘻嘻，好不容易找到的，有用请采纳哦。
Six years ago,I made a living on【in】 a city ,spend【spending】 most of my pay on rent.One day,I went to a market 【加上at】about 9pm with a friend and saw a man sitting on a wall.The ...

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嘻嘻，好不容易找到的，有用请采纳哦。
Six years ago,I made a living on【in】 a city ,spend【spending】 most of my pay on rent.One day,I went to a market 【加上at】about 9pm with a friend and saw a man sitting on a wall.The man had all【both】 his hands covered with bandages.He told us that he had an accident with plate glass,and was waiting【加上for】 his friend to come.We gave him our love and go【went】 home. At 11pm,we happened to drive by and saw him again:My friend never showed up. I had just 100 dollar【dollars】 with me. I gave the money to him but tould him to get a place to stay【加上at】.I an【was】 broke then,but I did not regret to【去掉to】 giving away all the money.

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