作业帮我的英文面试自我介绍.有不好的或请大家指出.Good morning My name is Wang Siyuan.the 24-year-old.I will be graduated from June Wuxi Science and Technology Vocational College.Majoring in die design and manufacturing.My disposition is
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我的英文面试自我介绍.有不好的或请大家指出.Good morning My name is Wang Siyuan.the 24-year-old.I will be graduated from June Wuxi Science and Technology Vocational College.Majoring in die design and manufacturing.My disposition is
我的英文面试自我介绍.有不好的或请大家指出.
Good morning
My name is Wang Siyuan.the 24-year-old.I will be graduated from June Wuxi Science and Technology Vocational College.Majoring in die design and manufacturing.
My disposition is humorous、open and bright
I Like Painting computer and basketball.
Because the graduates,my work experience is not very rich,but ,as long as the company giving me the chance,I believe through learning I can be competent this position
Thank you.
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我的英文面试自我介绍.有不好的或请大家指出.Good morning My name is Wang Siyuan.the 24-year-old.I will be graduated from June Wuxi Science and Technology Vocational College.Majoring in die design and manufacturing.My disposition is
总的来说还是不错的,有一些小的语法和时态错误,修改如下：
Good morning.
My name is Wang Siyuan.I'm 24 years old.I will graduat from Wuxi Science and Technology Vocational College in June this year.I major in die design and manufacturing.
My character(用这个词表示“性格”比原来的更好) is humorous,open-minded（“心胸开阔的”比open好） and optimistic(用“乐观的”比较好).
I like painting,computer and basketball.
As a graduate,my work experience is not very plentiful(丰富的,充足的,多的).However ,as long as the company give me the chance,I believe I would be qualified and competent for this position through my endeavor（努力）.
Thank you.