英语改错题.求答案=A=Dear Sally,Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation,of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired.I think it was helpful to work this holiday.It

英语改错题.求答案=A=Dear Sally,Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation,of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired.I think it was helpful to work this holiday.It
英语改错题.求答案=A=
Dear Sally,
Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation,of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired.I think it was helpful to work this holiday.It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family.I used to keep on ask them for my money,but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent.I've learnt how to get along well with others.What's worse,I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can't be learnt from textbooks.All these will be good for my furture.In a word,I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

英语改错题.求答案=A=Dear Sally,Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation,of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired.I think it was helpful to work this holiday.It
Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation->Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job in this summer vacation
of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency->in which i worked as a guide in a traval agency
I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family.->I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support the family.
I used to keep on ask them for my money->I used to keep on asking them for my money
What's worse->what's more

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Dear Sally,
1. Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job (插入介词 in ) this summer vacation, (of which 改为when，非限制性定语从句，先行词为时间)I worked (like改成as）...

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括号里的是更正的答案以及可供参考的解释，希望可以帮到你哦！
Dear Sally,
1. Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job (插入介词 in ) this summer vacation, (of which 改为when，非限制性定语从句，先行词为时间)I worked (like改成as） a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but （tired改为tiring，客观事物性质用-ing表示令人……，主语不是人；-ed是人主观感受，.这里工作是事物不是人，所以用-ing)
2. I think it was helpful to work (插入介词 in）this holiday.
3. It was the first time that I （have改成had，由主句的谓语动词的时态决定。如果是一般现在时，后面从句用现在完成时态；如果是一般过去时，后面从句则用过去完成时态） earned money on my own.
4. I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support （删去介词 for） the family.
5. I used to keep on （ask改为asking，介词后接动名词形式） them for （删去my，钱是父母给的，不是“父母把你的钱给你”，表达有误） money,but （删去now，后面用了will，表示将来的事，此状语表示的是现在） I'll never waste money （插入again) and learn to share worry with my parent.
6. I've learnt how to get along well with others.What's (改worse为more，事情往好的方向发展并没有变坏啊！^-^）,I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something （插入连词that,先行词something为不定代词，所以只能用that) can't be learnt from textbooks.All these will be good for my furture.In a word,I had (改the为a，泛指“一个”，以后或许还有很多这样精彩和有价值的假期哦，不要绝对化了，呵呵） wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

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