哪位英语强人帮忙修改下这篇文章,看看有哪些错误 (代问)It's30 years since policy of reform and opening-up began.And thanks to it, a large number of deeply changes have taken place in our life. In the past,there were few building

哪位英语强人帮忙修改下这篇文章,看看有哪些错误 (代问)It's30 years since policy of reform and opening-up began.And thanks to it, a large number of deeply changes have taken place in our life. In the past,there were few building
哪位英语强人帮忙修改下这篇文章,看看有哪些错误 (代问)
It's30 years since policy of reform and opening-up began.And thanks to it, a large number of deeply changes have taken place in our life.
In the past,there were few buildings in the cities,which were very small and simple.In the conuntryside,farmers only planted several kinds of greens and grain.
it's easy to imagine that the life in that time is really hard.
But today,everyting goes different.huge buildings have been set up in the cities.And in the field,it's hard to know how many produce were growing.Also,we can see the famers with the smiles.
that's to say,all aspects of our life differ from that time.We Chinese are getting richer,our country China is getting stronger.

哪位英语强人帮忙修改下这篇文章,看看有哪些错误 (代问)It's30 years since policy of reform and opening-up began.And thanks to it, a large number of deeply changes have taken place in our life. In the past,there were few building
较明显的地方建议修改如下：
0.It's30 years since policy of reform and opening-up began --- It's30 years since the implementation of the policy of reform and opening-up.
1.deeply changes -deep changes
2.only planted several kinds of greens and grain -- only planted limited kinds of crops
3.it's easy to imagine that the life in that time is really hard.-- it's easy to imagine that life then was really hard.
4.everyting goes different- things are different
5.And in the field,it's hard to know how many produce were growing -- And in the fields,it's hard to know how many kinds of crops are growing
6.that's to say,all aspects of our life differ from that time.--- So we can see that quite many (因为你只讲了城市和乡村）aspects of our life have changed greatly.
7.We Chinese are getting richer,and our country is getting stronger.

恩,同上...........

deeply in line2should be replaced by long-term
simple in line3should be replaced by simple-structured
the in line3 should be delected
different in line6 should be replaced by differently
producein line7 should be replaced by plants
with the smiles should be replaced by with smile

完美～

有些自创词语显得chinglish

1.reform of policy----- 政策改革
2.began---begun
3.a large amount of
number只修饰不可数名词
4.deeply----deep
5.grain----grains
6.everthing goes different,goes最好用become,但无语法错误
7.se...

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1.reform of policy----- 政策改革
2.began---begun
3.a large amount of
number只修饰不可数名词
4.deeply----deep
5.grain----grains
6.everthing goes different,goes最好用become,但无语法错误
7.set up--------build up
8.in the field----------on the field
9.were growing---------are growing
10.also后不用"," 此处也可用"moreover,besides"等加","
11.we can see farmers with smile
12That is to say,all aspect of our life now differ from then.
13.we Chinese去掉we our country China去掉China
14.stronger改为 more prosperous更佳
对我的回答还满意吗^-^

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还是有问题的。
第二行中deeply是副词，不能做定语。要表示“翻天覆地的变化”可以改为“great changes"
第二段的“life in that ……”中的"is"改为"was",过去式。 注意，Huge buildings……开头字母大写。还有，set up可以改为“erected",有“拔地而起”的意思，更为生动。
还有，“And in th...

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还是有问题的。
第二行中deeply是副词，不能做定语。要表示“翻天覆地的变化”可以改为“great changes"
第二段的“life in that ……”中的"is"改为"was",过去式。 注意，Huge buildings……开头字母大写。还有，set up可以改为“erected",有“拔地而起”的意思，更为生动。
还有，“And in the field,it's hard to know how many produce were growing” 麻烦解释下好么，我……没看懂。
“Also,we can see the famers with the smiles.”这句写的很奇怪，你最好改为“Also,we can see the famers' life are getting much happier with a significent increase in their harvest.
其实，写农民之前，可以先写城市居民生活水平的提高，什么的。与上文对应。
结尾中，country可改为motherland.

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