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英语翻译领导要改网页设计,请大神们帮我翻译下领导的英语Hi Jasmine,It's important for me to know your feedback on this as it will helpme learn more of your expectations.Thoughts (i.e.,opinion):1.I think it will be better to hav
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Hi Jasmine,
It's important for me to know your feedback on this as it will helpme learn more of your expectations.
Thoughts (i.e.,opinion):
1.I think it will be better to have the grey background to be a bithappier,and perhaps have a faded-like photo of students and teachers in a
staged learning situation.I understand the Lions (East/West) idea and maybe it
works but people will have to think about this yin/yang issue deeply rather
than bring it to life.
2.I think grey creates a low mood-- perhaps more lively colorswithin the pamphlet may cheer it up.More yellows,oranges,purples as
backgrounds (or even tiffany-green) may make people more attracted to reading.
3.I think the pictures need re-shaping and put it different places.For the cities perhaps including some staff introductions like Rachel,Jallina,
or Roger in SH,Michelle in BJ and Yang Laoshi or even Ivy in GZ to replace two
photos may be more inviting.
4.The BJ photo of the lion on the BJ page is too big it looks likewe need a big photo because we have little to say.
5.The brochure looks 80% the same as the one we have now.
Feedback (things I noticed):
1.On some pages the text protects the lion images at the bottom andon other pages the text or text boxes overlap the lion images.We should either
protect those images and re-shape some items on the page or remove them.
Otherwise it looks sloppy.
2.The student comments fonts need enlarging (too small to be read)and the writing should be in black rather than grey.
3.The city lists on the back seem to have strange letter"L's" and "I's," so I think the font needs to be reviewed
more closely.
4.I think the "Corporate Clients" and "China workexperience" title format can be changed so that it fits the same format as
all the title information throughout the brochure.
5.I believe the brochure should include a message from the CEO.Itwarms the brochure.
Overall,I believe the brochure can appear bolder (with blackletters) and brighter (with more interesting colors in the background).When I
read this version,I am hard-pressed to find the "advancement" of
this brochure from the last.It seems like this brochure is a improved draft of
the last one however,the updates do not add to any "wow" factor.
Thanks,
Bryan

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