Last February,I was on holiday in Beijing with my family．One morning,I was sleepingsoundly while I was woken up by a suddenly cry of my sister,"It's snowing．" I got up quickly,dressed me and opened the window．Wow,I couldn't believe in my eyes

Last February,I was on holiday in Beijing with my family．One morning,I was sleepingsoundly while I was woken up by a suddenly cry of my sister,"It's snowing．" I got up quickly,dressed me and opened the window．Wow,I couldn't believe in my eyes
Last February,I was on holiday in Beijing with my family．One morning,I was sleeping
soundly while I was woken up by a suddenly cry of my sister,"It's snowing．" I got up quickly,
dressed me and opened the window．Wow,I couldn't believe in my eyes．Everything including
trees,roofs and grass were covered with thick snow．In distance I could see lots of cars,like small
white box,moving slowly on the road．I could also see some lovely birds flying happily in the
snow．How a beautiful sight!I became exciting because I had never seen snow before.In no time,
I ran out with my camera and take many photos to record my first experience of snow．改错,救命,在考试

Last February,I was on holiday in Beijing with my family．One morning,I was sleepingsoundly while I was woken up by a suddenly cry of my sister,"It's snowing．" I got up quickly,dressed me and opened the window．Wow,I couldn't believe in my eyes
Last February, I was on holiday in Beijing with my family．One morning, I was sleeping
soundly 【while--when 】I was woken up by a 【suddenly--sudden】 cry of my sister, "It's snowing．" I got up quickly,
dressed 【me--myself】 and opened the window．Wow, I couldn't believe 【去除in】 my eyes．Everything including
trees, roofs and grass【 were---was】 covered with thick snow．In【加the】 distance I could see lots of cars, like small
white 【box---boxes】, moving slowly on the road．I could also see some lovely birds flying happily in the
snow．【How--What】 a beautiful sight! I became 【exciting--excited】 because I had never seen snow before. In no time,
I ran out with my camera and 【take---took】 many photos to record my first experience of snow．