英语短文纠错There are four seasons in a year:spring,summer,autumn and winter.Each season has three months.There are three months in spring:March,April and May.I like spring best.Because there are so many beautiful things.In spring,the weather t

英语短文纠错There are four seasons in a year:spring,summer,autumn and winter.Each season has three months.There are three months in spring:March,April and May.I like spring best.Because there are so many beautiful things.In spring,the weather t
英语短文纠错
There are four seasons in a year:spring,summer,autumn and winter.Each season has three months.There are three months in spring:March,April and May.I like spring best.Because there are so many beautiful things.In spring,the weather turn warm,it is not colder than winter and not hotter than summer.The sky is blue.People take off their coats,and wear pretty dress.The leaves turn green,the grass grow up,the park's flowers come out,There are many butterflies and bees over the flowers.they are very beautifully.The birds come back and sing in the tree,it sings very wonderfully.In spring.The air is fresh,I often do a lot of things.I usually plant trees and go hiking.Last spring,I climbed mountain with my friends,it is very interesting.I think climbing can make me stronger and relieve stress in this season.So spring is a lovely season.Spring is the first season of a year.In China,people usually said:The whole year’s work depends on a good start in spring.We can make lots of plans in this season.So spring is a hopeful season.I like it.
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英语短文纠错There are four seasons in a year:spring,summer,autumn and winter.Each season has three months.There are three months in spring:March,April and May.I like spring best.Because there are so many beautiful things.In spring,the weather t
第三行：turn改为：turns （用三单形式）
第六行：beautifully 改为：beautiful （be动词后面接形容词））
第六行：it sings 改为：They sing ( 前面用的是：The birds 主语是复数,所以后面用they)
第八行：mountain改为：mountains ( 可以：climb a mountain 或者climb mountains 二者选其一)
第八行：is 改为：was (Last 说的是过去,所以后面的谓语用was)
第十行：said改为：say( 对于习语来说：一般用现在时态,不用过去时态,所以是：say)
句子部分：
1 The leaves turn green,the grass grow up,the park's flowers come out.可以改连贯些
改：The leaves turn green ,the grass grow up and the flowers in parks come out .
(花儿开花,可以用 come out )
2 The birds come back and sing in the tree .这里是泛指,tree 前面不加定冠词,tree 是可数名词,应该用复数.就像你前面用的 the leaves ,the flowers in parks 一样.
改：The birds come back and sing in trees.
3 Last spring,I climbed mountain with my friends,it is very interesting.时态有错误.
改：Last spring ,I climbed mountains with my friends ,it was very interesting.
4 We can make lots of plans in this season.So spring is a hopeful season.这两句显得有点冗余,可以合并成一句,就比较简洁了.
改：Spring is a hopeful season and we can make lots of plans during these days.

你好，
第三行：turn 改为turns 第四行：dress 改为 dresses, 第五行：grass 改为grasses, 第六行：beautifully 改为beautiful，第八行：climbed和 mountain之间加一个a,
其他都正确

In spring, the weather （turns） warm,
the grass （grows） up
beautifully--beautiful
The birds--the bird

People take off their coats, and wear pretty dress.有语病，如果dress指所有衣服的统称，那么前面的coat也算在内；如果仅指连衣裙， 则用people做主语不当。
The leaves turn green, the grass grow up, the park's flowers come out一句有联句嫌疑，起码最后一句前要加...

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People take off their coats, and wear pretty dress.有语病，如果dress指所有衣服的统称，那么前面的coat也算在内；如果仅指连衣裙， 则用people做主语不当。
The leaves turn green, the grass grow up, the park's flowers come out一句有联句嫌疑，起码最后一句前要加连词。 flower不能come out，也不能说 parks's flower, 建议改为：flowers blosom in parks.
they are very beautifully.主语大写，beautifully-beautiful.
The birds come back and sing in the tree, it sings very wonderfully.主语复数
In spring. 是个句子?
people usually said, as the old saying goes

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第三行：turn改为：turns （用三单形式）
第五行：grow改为：grows （用三单形式）

第六行：beautifully 改为：beautiful （be动词后面接形容词）
第七行：it sings 改为：They sing ( 主语是复数)
第八行：mountain改为：mountains ( 是复数)
第十行：sa...

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第三行：turn改为：turns （用三单形式）
第五行：grow改为：grows （用三单形式）

第六行：beautifully 改为：beautiful （be动词后面接形容词）
第七行：it sings 改为：They sing ( 主语是复数)
第八行：mountain改为：mountains ( 是复数)
第十行：said改为：say( 是一般现在时)

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