这篇英语文章有没有错的句子有把原句修改一下there is a supermarket its name is star shopping mall the supermarket has 6 floors it's in have many bookstore electrical shop clothes store it opens from 9点 at to 10点 o‘clock there

这篇英语文章有没有错的句子有把原句修改一下there is a supermarket its name is star shopping mall the supermarket has 6 floors it's in have many bookstore electrical shop clothes store it opens from 9点 at to 10点 o‘clock there
这篇英语文章有没有错的句子有把原句修改一下
there is a supermarket its name is star shopping mall the supermarket has 6 floors it's in have many bookstore electrical shop clothes store it opens from 9点 at to 10点 o‘clock there are many customers everyday come and buy for yourself at a shopping mall

这篇英语文章有没有错的句子有把原句修改一下there is a supermarket its name is star shopping mall the supermarket has 6 floors it's in have many bookstore electrical shop clothes store it opens from 9点 at to 10点 o‘clock there
There is a supermarket its（改为whose) name is (加the) star shopping mall. The supermarket has 6 floors it's in have many bookstore electrical shop clothes store it opens from 9点 at to 10点 o‘clock there are many customers everyday come and buy for yourself at a shopping mall
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There is a supermarket whose name is the Star Shopping Mall. There are 6 floors in it and many bookstores, electrical shops and clothes stores are in it. It opens at 9:00 am and closes at 10:00. Many customers come and by for themselves in the mall.

it's in have many bookstore
修改成 There are many stores,such as bookstores,elevtrical shop,clothes store and so on.
it opens from 9点 at to 10点 o‘clock
修改成it opens from nine AM to ten PM.

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it's in have many bookstore
修改成 There are many stores,such as bookstores,elevtrical shop,clothes store and so on.
it opens from 9点 at to 10点 o‘clock
修改成it opens from nine AM to ten PM.
there are many customers everyday come and buy for yourself at a shopping mall
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there are many customers who are coming and buy a lot of things for theirselves at this shopping mall everyday
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