麻烦帮我改一改这篇英语作文（错误或不当的地方）Many people like driving car because they all think that the car is fast and it can only spend a few time going any where,so many people seldon ride bike.But cycling is more useful

麻烦帮我改一改这篇英语作文（错误或不当的地方）Many people like driving car because they all think that the car is fast and it can only spend a few time going any where,so many people seldon ride bike.But cycling is more useful
麻烦帮我改一改这篇英语作文（错误或不当的地方）
Many people like driving car because they all think that the car is fast and it can only spend a few time going any where,so many people seldon ride bike.But cycling is more useful than drive car.For example,cycling doesn't cause air pollution and it doesn't have many traffic acciident ,what'more,cycling is a good exercise and it's good for our health.I hope people can ride bike often instead of drive car.
作文要求：现在有汽车的人越来越多了,骑自行车的人越来越少了,你能否简单阐述一下骑自行车的好处,进而宣传一下让更多的人骑自行车.

麻烦帮我改一改这篇英语作文（错误或不当的地方）Many people like driving car because they all think that the car is fast and it can only spend a few time going any where,so many people seldon ride bike.But cycling is more useful
Many people like driving car because they all think that the car is fast and it just spend only （a）去掉 few time going any where(anywhere),so many people seldon （seldom）ride bike.But cycling is more useful than drive（driving） car.For example,cycling doesn't cause air pollution and it doesn't have many traffic acciident ,what'more,cycling is a good exercise and it's good for our health.I hope people can ride bike more often instead of drive(driving) car.
你仔细对照一下,

我直接帮你写一份吧。根据你的再加上我的改编，我觉得差不多了吧。希望可以多追加点分、谢谢Many people drive cars cause they think cars are fast and convenient which could save them a lot of time. I think there are just too less people riding bikes...

全部展开

我直接帮你写一份吧。根据你的再加上我的改编，我觉得差不多了吧。希望可以多追加点分、谢谢Many people drive cars cause they think cars are fast and convenient which could save them a lot of time. I think there are just too less people riding bikes. Riding bikes have a few benifits: First bike does not cause air pollution and it may efficiently reduces car accidents. Except this, riding bike is another way of exercising bodies. It is really good for our health. Finally, bikes are far cheaper than cars. As a result, why not we guys ride bikes instead of cars?

收起

Many people like driving car because they all think that the car is fast and it just spend only （a）去掉 few time going any where(anywhere),so many people seldon （seldom）ride bike. But cycling is more us...

全部展开

Many people like driving car because they all think that the car is fast and it just spend only （a）去掉 few time going any where(anywhere),so many people seldon （seldom）ride bike. But cycling is more useful than drive（driving） car.For example,cycling doesn't cause air pollution and it doesn't have many traffic acciident ,what'more,cycling is a good exercise and it's good for our health.I hope people can ride bike more often instead of drive(driving) car.

收起